Outline and Thesis

Thesis:
Realistic games are much more effective in portraying issues of suffering and attempts of survival, rather than sinister "fantasy" shooter/torture games.

Outline:

A. Introduction
-Thesis

B. Paragraph One
-Describe, and reveal both games purposes so the audience may better understand them
-Bring about the issues for both games

C. Contrast Dafur is Dying
-Realistic game
-Has hints and messages throughout game portraying the everyday suffering
-So real you feel as if you're a tribe member trying to make your escape
-Wants player to donate to the Dafurains cause
-Plays directly into your emotions thrying to persuade the player

D. Contrast The Torture Game II
-Sinister "fantasy" shooter/torture game
-Human roped up is targeted by variuos weapons
-The bigger the gun or weapon, the more damage done to the human roped up
-When the body is simply shot in the head, or the body is fully mutilated, the game is over,
but you can continue to sever all body parts... If you so desire